Date: May 08, 2011 04:11:27 pm Title: Sexy Time and Fighting
Oh wow! *le gulp* This chapter was quite - surprising! *nods*
First Kiro's leaving, and now Shin's- lust? Sweet mother of Jesus, this was amazing! *points*
Poor Yuki-kun. :/ I hope he'll be okay very soon.
I cannot deny, though, that I really, I mean REALLY L-O-V-E this part!
"Yu gave a heavy sigh. "Mother. Fucking. Andy. And his mother. Fucking. Leather."" So perfect! *nods and points*
Aaah!!! Chance! Don't kill Andy!! It's not his fault! It's Yu's! He's so God-damned sexy! *squeaks*
Oh, Kasimir! You've fallen for that woman, haven't you? Don't worry though, we'll support you! *claps and cheers*
Author's Response: I love you xD So much. You always review all... long-y. And it makes me happeh :D Yuki is problematic. Drama queen, methinks (; And yes. Andy's mother fucking leather xD So sexeh. And Chance and Andy has an odd relationship :p But how could Andy resist Yu? O.O I couldn't resist either of them. And Kass is confusalled. Poor thing (: THANK YOUUUUUU :D
Date: Apr 29, 2011 03:06:23 pm Title: Attraction and Connection
"Yu finally looked at him. "Your voice is really sexy," he said, getting up from the swing and stretching a bit. He kicked at a rock and turned to look at Andy again. "And so is that cigarette.""
*grins* I love that bit! Very much! :D
I'm so glad that Lumi and Shin are friends again. Somewhat. xD And uuuuuuuuh! *winks*
""I understand," Kristian said. He looked around the room once more."I also understand that you're not gay, Mr. Sands, but I am. And we're in your bedroom. And you're a beautiful man. So if we could go...?""
*laughs* I love that part too! xD
Dear, sweet Jesus! *squeaks* I really, REALLY do wonder what will happen there. *smirks*
Update as soon as you can, please! This story is amazing!! *bounces*
Author's Response: I know right xD Have you ever seen Andy Six with a cigarette? *drools* I think smoking is just disgusting, but it's sooooo sexy on him xD And we'll see what happens with Lumi and Shin :D AND The Kiro Strify part which I'm planning to be hella steamy. And thank you!!!! Best reviewer ever, methinks xD
Date: Apr 29, 2011 02:42:48 pm Title: Realization and Secrets
Oh! *blushes* I already thought that Yu's going to... Well... Become a bulimic. I'm extremely glad he didn't though! *nods frantically*
Lumi is evil; how the heck did Shin suppose to know he was- fine? *squeaks*
Woohoo! Kiro, slow down a bit! *laughs* But, Strify should have known that if you lead somebody to your room, it's either dress up party, or party under the covers. xD Yeah...
Andy and Yu are pretty cute together. Just saying... xP
Author's Response: Well... Yu is... we'll see about that xD Lumi's uncaring. He speaks his mind. And so he did with Shin. Poor Kirokins xD All confusalled. And yeah. Andy and Yu are fadorable. Thank ya kindly :D
Date: Apr 29, 2011 02:09:36 pm Title: Awkward Moments and Mess Ups.
"Kristian walked in, but stopped short when gasps were heard, and Cassidy called out the word that would make the evening that much harder on them all.
*gasps with them all* Gordon Bennett! Kiro obviously looks just like their mother had! *faints*
Nah! He's just high, Shinya. I hope... *looks weirdly*
Don't you dare to do something I believe you're going to do, Yu Phoenix! Push-ups are fun (I think), do them! *scolds*
I like the things that are going on between Kasimir and Karah! *grins*
Lumi is loosing his mind, but alright; he's still awesome! xD
Awesome chapter!!! *does a happy dance*
Date: Apr 29, 2011 01:39:39 pm Title: The First Steps In Going A Little Insane
Oh, thank goodness! I thought Yu'd never realize that eating junk food is bad! Eat carrot or something healthier if you really must! *points*
Luminor's part is seriously amazing; I love his carefree too! And I really wonder what will Shin do. *bounces*
Uuuuh!! Andy and Yu? Weeee!! *claps* xD
Date: Apr 29, 2011 02:19:18 am Title: Prologues and Introductions
you know kiro's name is carsten, shin's is marcel and yu's is hannes, right?
Author's Response: Yeah, I know that, but I started this before all that came out. Besides, Andy is Andy Six and not Sixx. And Kasimir's character Taylor isn't dating Karah anymore, but it's fanfiction. Just a story. Can't very well change it now xD It'd confused the hell out of everyone.
Date: Mar 11, 2010 12:07:16 am Title: Realization and Secrets
Yay! I missed this story so much! :D
I love the way you have each character representing a different sin, and in my opinion your portrayals of the sins are perfect.
I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens between Shin & Luminor and Strify & Kiro in the upcoming chapters. I'm particularly curious about how Strify's going to react to Kiro shirtless. :P
Seriously, though, definitely keep writing; you're amazing at it!
Date: Nov 18, 2009 01:52:13 am Title: Awkward Moments and Mess Ups.
I don't even know what to put into words that could describe how I feel about this story.
You never cease to amaze me, Abbie.
Date: Nov 06, 2009 12:17:58 am Title: The First Steps In Going A Little Insane
Fiiirst, Kiro's part made me cry. Second, I could TOTALLY see Kasimir and Karah together, even if it's just for 'marketing' xD. Third, this sentence "Stop making my heart stop with that smile or we’ll need to call an ambulance." just made my whole week. And Andy telling "I love your smile" to Yu was incredibly cute! Fourth, Luminor's part just owned! xD. "And I just want to hear you scream my name" made me hold my breath. Fifth, I seriously can't picture Yu fat, but I'm trying oO. Sixth, I know I'm totally wrong, but I totally picture myself as Strify's daughter Ashley ._. And last but not least, seventh, I KNEEEEEEW that the blond guy with Luminor was Shin! HA!
So, sorry for the huuuuge review >< I'm loving this story, like I love all your stories ((:
Date: Nov 04, 2009 04:06:38 am Title: The First Steps In Going A Little Insane
It'll make them think you're up to something.
And you probably are.
I LOVED this chapter.
I'm falling deeper and deeper.
Getting sweeter and sweeter.
Date: Oct 30, 2009 08:44:57 pm Title: Changes.
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Date: Oct 30, 2009 08:34:52 pm Title: Prologues and Introductions
i like this so far. Strify greed i can see. The luminor being high i can see, but not lazy yet. I'm sure you'll convince me. Yu eating enough to feed an army is a maybe for me too. Shin being envious is halfway, because I've always thought of Shin as content and peaceful :P Andy Sixx being wrath and cursing like there's no tomorrow XD yeah that sounds right. kasimir i don't know who that is so... and kiro being the little sin of lust, is possibly the most awesome thing ever XD it kind of reminded me of the skye sweetnam dance thing when Kiro was acting like a stripper XD
Date: Oct 28, 2009 10:35:19 pm Title: Prologues and Introductions
I just thought that Strify and Andy wud fit together.
In estonian,kass means cat.
And me loves the slutty kiki^^MUCH
Was it REALLY gay emos there?
Thats too good to be real.
Author's Response: They might be together later. Who knows :) Kasimir is Bill Kaulitz's cat's name. And gay emos where? Andy and Chance?
Date: Oct 27, 2009 03:47:34 am Title: Changes.
I love it.
Need I say more?
I quoted you!!!
"Having the power and being overpowered. Two different highs; both as amazing as the other."
Oh my god, yes.
Author's Response: yay :) but this sounds reminiscent of the "bite my lip and do naughty things" review xD anyway... I want you for my birthday. Just letting you know ;)
Date: Oct 27, 2009 01:54:15 am Title: Changes.
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Author's Response: Backwards AND upside down!!!! Holy Gustav. You win, my friend. Epic win :)
Date: Oct 25, 2009 05:59:13 pm Title: Prologues and Introductions
WAHHH!! I'm addicted to this one TOO!!
Your my ABSOLUTE favorite Abbie-kins.
You need to put off your homework some more and write the next chapter.
Five stars and an internet kiss.
Author's Response: Wish I could but I'd rather not fail xD I'm glad you like it!!! Yay! Kisses! :D