Date: Jan 11, 2010 09:07:45 am Title: Mistakes, Kings, and BFFs
omg lolo lolol thiss is so funny girl!!!! xD well i like kiro being bitchy, and we know waht is going to happen when strify and kiro meet xD please update, u havent in a while.. >> *death glare* i want to read from u missy!
Author's Response: I'm sorry!! I haven't really had any time lately xD I am actually about to start writing again, and hopefully you shall review... Or else I shall call and get you xD
Date: Nov 22, 2009 08:30:31 pm Title: Fights, Depression, and Begging
This is a great story so far. When moderating, however, I noticed a few mistakes. I suggest using a spell-checker or, if you already are, proof-reading more closely or getting a beta-reader. There were quite a few spelling mistakes in there. I'd also suggest reading the punctuation/grammar guide, particular the comma and semi-colon sections, as there were a few mistakes regarding those in the most recent chapter, that I have fixed. All in all though, I think this is a great story so far and I will definitely be continuing to read. :)
Author's Response: That's really nice. You seem to be the most helpful with my errors. I usually type using Notepad instead of Microsoft Word, so spell check would be a good thing for me to remember to do. I would like someone to beta, but it takes way too much time, so I will try to rad over it more closely next time. I appreciate the help, and I am glad you like it :)
Date: Oct 24, 2009 10:18:55 pm Title: Mini Skirts, Makeup, and Laughter
No,artificial sugar tablets 4 me!!
Kiro in a drag...interesting.
Author's Response: wait til you see how wonderfully funny I plan on making this XD Kiro in drag is going to become, how to say... much more extreme XD
Date: Oct 22, 2009 05:33:17 pm Title: Fights, Depression, and Begging
this is so interesting^^
Author's Response: wait til you hear what Kiro has to do... :) It will make up most of the rest of the story. I am chewing blueberry pomegranate gum. It is actually very good. XD