[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 03:10:40 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
I just have to say what an amazing story this was... Thanks for sharing it with us!
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2011 03:52:13 pm Title: Case Closed.
Oh my god!...
So that means both Shin and Yu died?! :O
It was a great story, good job! :)
Date: Aug 01, 2011 04:16:24 am Title: Halfway Across The World...
Sniff sniff... reading this makes me wanna snuggle with my best friend... but were not friends anymore.... heart hurts... anxiety..... depression..... sigh...
Date: May 14, 2011 12:58:39 pm Title: Halfway Across The World...
yey, strify didn't curse the ground kiro walked on. and now they're speaking again. :)
*is very happy with this story*
Date: May 13, 2011 11:56:02 pm Title: He Can Get In With A Passport.
hotness. and strify drunk is so so funny. :D
my favorite thing is being alive. >.
Date: May 13, 2011 11:13:15 pm Title: Oh, I Can Take It.
its a cute ending :)
Date: May 13, 2011 11:01:42 pm Title: Like... The Time We Had Those Pancakes.
i love noel! he is awesomeness.
now i'm wondering how strify will react to finding out he has a stalker.
Date: May 13, 2011 10:43:13 pm Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
i really like this so far! wondering how the two will finaly meet... go kiro go!
*is a stalker herself*
Date: Apr 25, 2011 04:14:54 am Title: Case Closed.
Wait...Kiro and Yu both died?
That is so fucked up, man!
Date: Mar 20, 2011 10:19:30 pm Title: Case Closed.
THATS THE ENDING!?!?!?!?!?!?!? D: NOOOOOOOOOO! THAT CAN'T BE THE ENDING!!!!! THATS THE WRONG ENDING!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Mar 20, 2011 07:40:09 pm Title: You're Pretty Here.
I love it! You are so... GOOD! Ugh, amazing!
Date: Mar 20, 2011 06:45:12 am Title: We Don't Know What Year It Is Anymore...
Ugh you have me so hooked! It's three in the morning and I'm tired as hell but I can't... Stop... Reading!!!!! It's so good! Too good! You're a genius and it's killing me XD haha wonderful job
Date: Mar 20, 2011 03:36:58 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
hm... very interesting idea, I like it :)
Date: Mar 20, 2011 02:43:06 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
hm... very interesting idea, I like it :)
Date: Feb 06, 2011 02:36:15 am Title: Case Closed.
i love it . So cute.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2011 03:56:04 pm Title: Case Closed.
This story is amazing!! I couldn't tear myself away from it until I was finished reading it.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2010 05:52:53 am Title: Case Closed.
ohh wow didn't expect that!! it made me cry a lot and i read all 25 of the chapters in one day i was determined to finish it i've read a lot of your stories and loved them especially 321 :) you're an amazing writer!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D glad to know my stories haven't lost their touch.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2010 01:38:23 pm Title: Case Closed.
The story is realy great and lovly but it made me cry in the end :(( poor Shinieeee *cries*...
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 01:24:22 am Title: Case Closed.
you cannot know the amount of tears that are pouring out of my eyes right now.
this fic was beautiful.
but the end...
how could you even bear to write it?
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 01:17:57 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
NEEEEEIN! Shinni! Yu's good for you, you have to love Yu!
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 01:11:10 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
God, Yu and Shin need to get together, seriously.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 12:55:52 am Title: Watch Me Forever...
you have no idea how much i awwwed.
i even cried god dammit!
beautiful, simply beautiful.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 12:48:40 am Title: You're Pretty Here.
lkfdhbkfhbkf this is beautiful
Date: Jul 31, 2010 12:33:56 am Title: Halfway Across The World...
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!
and AWWWWWWWWWW!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 12:19:17 am Title: I've Been Watching You...
NOOO KIRO BABY!!
Why did you tell him :(
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2010 12:08:12 am Title: He Can Get In With A Passport.
My favourite thing?
Music.
I know it's cliche, but I genuinely can't go an hour without it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:48:13 pm Title: Maybe We Were Just Meant To Be.
Yes! Yes! You ARE meant to be!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:42:34 pm Title: We Don't Know What Year It Is Anymore...
LOOOOOL! God if they were awake :')
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:37:31 pm Title: No Bigger Bond Than Being Random.
LOL AT SHIN, you beast shin, you beast.
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:33:20 pm Title: You Have To Kiss Me To Turn Me Back,
AWWWWWWWWWWWW! I'd steal both of them if I could :3
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:29:23 pm Title: Oh, I Can Take It.
YAAAAAAAAAAAY!
STRIFY KISSED KIRO, STRIFY KISSED KIRO!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:24:30 pm Title: Is It Possible You Got Smaller?
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
What a line "You can hide behind me anyday"
I THINK KIRO WOULD LET STRIFY DO ANYTING BEHIND HIM ANY DAY ;)
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 11:18:09 pm Title: Like... The Time We Had Those Pancakes.
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Well I love every chapter but this one has Noel Fielding in! I love him to pieces! And 'the time we had those pancakes'
oh my god, you're my new hero.
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2010 01:47:16 pm Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
I really really like it already! I think it's really cute ^^
Date: Jul 16, 2010 09:59:19 pm Title: Case Closed.
OhmyGod you totally just made me cry. (You can ignore the next few sentences) WHAT?! Why did they both have to die?! *throws myself over...the computer and sobs heart out* (It's safe now) Um. This story was...um...how do I say this without swearing? *I KNOW!* FINCREDIBLY FAWESOME!!!!!!!
Date: Jul 16, 2010 09:38:38 pm Title: Watch Me Forever...
xD I have to comment on that little line at the end of the chapter notes. The "rainbow road" thing? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rainbow_Road_(novel) Sorry. Had to. ANYWAY.
Date: Jun 07, 2010 04:37:33 pm Title: Case Closed.
Cries :( well, I guess they can be happy in the afterlife together? :(:(
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2010 12:42:35 am Title: Case Closed.
I have only one word to describe this:
AMAZING!!!
This was so great that I just can't explain it!
I didn't began to read it before but I've found it and once I've started to read, I just couldn't stop.
It made me cry bunch of times. But I cried like a baby when I read the last chapter. Did they really both had to die?
Oh, God! I can't explain how sad I am. At first I was like:
Kiro will be with Strify, and Shin will be with Yu, and everything will be just perfect! Happy ending.
But it turned out so sad, at least to me.
Anyway, I think you've write it perfect cuz I can't find the other way to finish it. Honesly, that I'm in your position I couldn't pick what to do. I couldn't just let some of the guys die. I don't like that ending. But, hey, not every story has an happy ending.
I just want to tell you that I'm so sorry I didn't began to read it on time
cuz this is one heck of the story that I really enjoyed in.
P.S. sorry for leaving you a novel here. xD
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2010 10:56:46 am Title: Case Closed.
I thought this ended really well. You're a talented writer, and the story was gripping from start to finish. I pretty much sat down and read this all in one go, and I really enjoyed it. I loved the way you described Kiro as a stalker, and the progression from that to a real relationship with Strify, and then with Yu and Shin at the end...aww :) Not aww that they died, obviously, but I still think it was a great way to end the story. Very cool :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^-^ This is the first review that doesn't make me hate how I ended it. I knew this was pretty much how it would go. My stories never end happily because that bores me, but when everyone flipped I thought I had made a bad choice. Thank you, really. I really really appreciate this ^-^
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2010 10:20:06 am Title: Case Closed.
OH My Goodness.
You just broke my heart.
...
I don't even know what to say.
There were (and still are) tears.
xx
Author's Response: I'm sorry!!! I personally think it's good that I made you cry. Not being mean, but I think it means I did my job as an author to get you to relate so much to them that there was an emotional attachment. The most important part of the story is the story. So maybe I did a good job by making you cry?
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2010 04:56:51 pm Title: Case Closed.
Sad ending.
Date: May 24, 2010 01:30:13 pm Title: Case Closed.
I'm just gonna pretend I never read this.....I love your writing, but this is depressing. I read fanfic becasue it helps keep the band alive, but you killed them :(
Author's Response: I'm sorry! That's how all of my stories end. I don't think up things with happy endings. There's no fun in happily ever afters. And I have like eighteen other fanfics that they're alive and cuddly in!!!
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2010 10:46:35 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
It can't be the end, it just can't be. That is the sadest thing i have ever read..
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2010 01:06:47 am Title: Case Closed.
I really hope they didn't die....
Update soon, bitte?
Author's Response: No they died xD That was the end. Sorry! thanks for the review and for sticking by the story, though!!!
Date: May 23, 2010 09:29:02 pm Title: Case Closed.
I finished reading this after I stopped when it wasnt finished. It was cute, sad, happy and good. Loved it ^_^
Poor Shinya though and Yu. T_T
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2010 06:16:56 pm Title: Case Closed.
....
O.o
I honestly would LIKE to write an intelligent review here...
but I don't think I can.
Strange to think that the twisted love story of Kiro stalking Strify would eventually lead to the deaths of their best friends.
But I guess that's why you're one of my favorite writers isn't it? It doesn't make sense, but at the same time, it makes perfect sense. If that makes sense, which I'm pretty sure it doesn't.
Either way, I loved it.
Author's Response: Oh, hun, I think you've gone mad xD It makes sense in the way that it doesn't make sense only in the sense that I understand because I never make sense. Therefore, we're all good here. Thank you for the very nice review ^-^ And for sticking by the story. And for understanding the best parts about a not-so-fairytale ending ^-^ I appreciate it when people don't judge on sad endings seeing as I LOVE sad endings. Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou!
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2010 05:55:41 pm Title: Case Closed.
Woah, sadistically beautiful end to one of the best stories on this site. Thank you for writing it for us and making it to the end.
Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad I found it in myself to write again so I COULD end it for you guys. Thank you so much for standing by the story even though I disappeared for so long. I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2010 05:23:28 pm Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
Aweeeeeeeeee poor Shin. *makes a little sad, pouty face* Fix him?
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2010 01:44:33 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
Aw, poor Shin and Yu.
Date: Mar 29, 2010 09:36:30 pm Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
"narwhal mating calls" haha you're crazy! :D
by the way i'm the 300th reviewer :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2010 08:47:57 pm Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
LMAO I SWEAR THE END NOTES SOUND LIKE MY DRAMA TEACHER, AT A.M.T Lol
Author's Response: YOU'RE AN IDIOT! - Abbiefayce
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2010 05:36:20 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
“What would you like me to serenade you with then, my love?”
“Narwhal mating calls,”
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh Reginald? I AGREE!!
I hope you get that reference.
I LOVE YOU!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2010 02:33:13 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
Audience absolutly loved it! :D *applause all around* very sad, very beautiful :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2010 02:27:16 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
“I’m sorry, but your air isn’t the air that I want.”
...That got one reaction from me... and it was... "WAAA!!"
Good Good.
xx
Date: Mar 29, 2010 12:59:47 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
I feel so bad for Shin and Yu :(
Strify and Kiro finally work things out, and now they're a mess! *sigh*
On a happier note, that episode of SpongeBob was hilarious! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2010 12:14:55 am Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
*wibbles* no.. no hurty Shin...
I know WHY.. but I still want him to be able to be happy with Yu...
Date: Mar 28, 2010 11:58:16 pm Title: You Air Isn't The Air That I Want.
We need an electrician to fix that darn televsion and maybe fix the whole entertainment system NOW!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2010 03:01:09 pm Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
Hey there! Just started reading this story yesterday but I never comment unless I'm up-to-date so I present to you: a comment.
Update soon, yes? I'll love you forever.
Date: Mar 23, 2010 08:05:15 am Title: You're Pretty Here.
:3 this story is amazing. I love it
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2010 02:37:29 pm Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
Eeek. I appear to have run out of chapters to read...
...What am I to do?
XD
You're amazing, am I'm rather pleased that your little author notes at the end of your chapters seem to have become slightly more happy for these last few chapters. :)
I eagerly await your next update.
(Rhyme XD)
xx
Date: Mar 22, 2010 10:44:26 am Title: No Bigger Bond Than Being Random.
"It could be like one fantastically hot threesome."
Baha.
...and then the end...
Shin is the greatest bestfriend ever.
xx
Date: Mar 22, 2010 08:52:18 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
"He even tried to imagine someone holding him, arms around his waist, kisses on his neck, whispers in his ears. He tried to imagine a someone beautiful wanting to just hold him for a while. He couldn’t."
...THAT made me cry.
Oh My Goodness.
*hugs him tightly*
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2010 03:39:16 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
Aah, I love this story so much.
Date: Mar 18, 2010 04:36:28 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
omgeee! you need to finnish this story! its soo cute!
Date: Mar 18, 2010 12:40:11 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
Oh wow this is great ^^ and so cute in a sad way though...
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2010 12:34:18 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
Awww I loved it! Poor Shin :(
Kiro and Strify are so cute! :3
Date: Mar 15, 2010 02:56:35 pm Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
Poor Shin, I hope he'll fall in love with Yu finally. I don't want Shin to be evil and trying to tear Kiro and Strify apart :(
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2010 07:45:44 am Title: His Majesty's Gorgeous Royal Prince From The Neighboring Kingdom
Ahhh how sweet^^
Xx
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2010 07:25:00 am Title: Kind Of Like Star-Crossed Lovers... But Not Really.
Haha i love it^^
I know what you mean, because i can't take my eyes of beautiful people either xD
Xx
Date: Mar 15, 2010 03:03:54 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
alice was famazing, and i really liked this chapter. it had a deeper meaning. I love how your stories are so packed with emotional power. Even if your writings are questionable by some standards, I'll always love it, and you ^^
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2010 03:01:54 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
O.o
Date: Mar 15, 2010 02:59:40 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
I like this chapter. It has me sensing that something is going to go wrong again, because traditional happy endings aren't really your style. Something is gonna have a twist. I feel it ^^
Date: Mar 15, 2010 02:54:33 am Title: Pt. 2 : Thank God.
I had to reread it becausee I forgot. :P
but the good news is, I am reading it, and the next chapter, and I'll always read things for you ^^
whose your fluffy buddy? O.o
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2010 02:48:53 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
You make me wanna update more. Stop that. STOP IT I SAY!!!
But if you break 300, I may just have to kill you. I WANT TO BREAK 300 TOO!!!!!!!
Five stars my love!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2010 12:38:27 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
Lol "famazing" hahahehe. anywho i loved this chapi!!!! Lol, i feel so bad for shinny and for Yu, i mean its overly obvious the boy cares for shin!! and Kiro is SO friggin oblivious its ridonkulous! - sigh - this somewhat sounds like my life.... Lol anyways i loved it!! i hope to read more soon :D much love :D
Date: Mar 15, 2010 12:37:55 am Title: He Mustn't Have Come...
I’m drinking all of your house and staying at your booze… wait. haha i LOVE it!!!
Date: Mar 10, 2010 06:04:13 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
Hey there,
I just wanted to let you know that I really appreciate yours stories. They are such joys to read. But I am saddened to read that you feel as if you have to write instead of because you wanted to...no one should ever be forced into writing, it only leads to writers block and stress. I've had writers block for so long now I don't even remember the last thing I've written...all these ideas would pop up but was never able to put them to paper before ripping it up (being a perfectionist who hates their work really sucks).
All this rambling to say that I hope you find your passion in your work again, and no longer feel pressured into creating a world for other to reads and revel in. I can honestly say that I look forward to your next chapter, however, I encourage you to take your time and not rush it ;)
Furthermore, I heard Alice was awesome! Hope you enjoy it :p
Ryze
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2010 11:33:19 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
oh my god!!!kiro is SO friggin oblivious to shin!!! Grr him!!! lol and Yu has a thingyy for shin... haha that came out way dirtier than i wanted hehe! lol and god i love this story so awesome! also i saw Alice!! that movie was franfriggintastic! lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2010 06:11:44 pm Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
Aww, Kiro&Strify is sooooooo cute!!! Can't wait to see the idea Strify has ;D
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2010 05:48:33 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
Woo Who!!!! Poor Shin!! *snuggles him*
Love, love, love it!!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2010 01:24:25 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
Yay! I'm so happy you're back Abbie.
Awesome chapter, by the way. It made me feel sorry for Shin and Yu.
Date: Mar 02, 2010 01:14:05 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
another fabulous chapter withen by Abbiefayce!!! :) i love it!!! please update soon, i want to know what happens with Yu and Shin ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2010 12:38:36 am Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
(Makes brownies) I put chocolate chips in them!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2010 11:29:21 pm Title: Pt. 2 : Being A Fish
Awh
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 07:18:03 am Title: Pt. 2 : Thank God.
sigh. sad sadness on chapi notes, but happy u found someone else lol and NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IM DONE READING!!! WAHHH SHOOT ME!!! I NEED MOREEEEEEE
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 07:13:23 am Title: Watch Me Forever...
awwwwwwwww im hung up on the end notes abbie!!! its so cute
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 06:26:31 am Title: You're Pretty Here.
the ending sentance was my favorite :D and im also pissed i ONLY Hve two more chapis left i wanna cry
Date: Feb 28, 2010 06:15:54 am Title: Halfway Across The World...
i wuhved it wuhverd wuhved wuhved it!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 06:10:53 am Title: Hurts Like A Motherfucker.
O_______O ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. dont expect anything better, because i am stunned into silence... kiro and strify need band aids for their hearts! and here you go, (__::__::__) i hope it them feel better pweese.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 06:06:34 am Title: I've Been Watching You...
A FULL CONFESSION!!! OH MY GOD!! HE COULD HAVE SAID IT WAS A SURPRISE FOR HIM, SOMETHING ANYTHING FROM A FULL OUT STALKER CONFESSION!!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!! @_@ I AM SO INCOHERENT RIGHT FUCKING NOW!!! THIS IS GAWD!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 06:01:06 am Title: He Can Get In With A Passport.
Music, music is my favorite thing in the world. I feel like i would be lost without it. It's quite literally my life. I write songs, i go to recording studios to record them, i have an 80Gb ipod i have a whole wall dedicated to CD's and yes cassettes i love music and any music. Its apart of me. I'm apart of it. - hope you liked it Lol :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 05:55:14 am Title: Play Dead. It's Easier Than You Think.
my Dad is a photographer and i totally understand the random spurts of inspiration!
:D
Lol i love this :D your awesomesauceness!
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 05:48:58 am Title: In More Graphic Words.
OHMNOMNOMNOMNOM!!! oh so yummi and sensual, i love your writing! its totally rah rah rah ah ah ah Roma roma mamaa, ga ga oh lala.!!! sorry that song is stuck in my head... lol I LOVE THIS
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 05:42:02 am Title: You Can Never Cuddle Too Much
grrrrrrrrrrrrr shins meanie headed boyfriend and oh my strify dearest if only you knew.
Date: Feb 28, 2010 03:37:58 am Title: Maybe We Were Just Meant To Be.
stalker, stalker, stalkerrr!!!!!1 lol and i love it! :)
Date: Feb 28, 2010 03:25:01 am Title: We Don't Know What Year It Is Anymore...
=.= Lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 03:17:57 am Title: No Bigger Bond Than Being Random.
LMAO I CAN SOOO IMAGINE THAT HAPPENING!!! also i would love to join the cuddle fest even though its WAYYYYY over ! :D
Date: Feb 28, 2010 03:14:21 am Title: You Have To Kiss Me To Turn Me Back,
Lol so fluffi und cute :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 03:10:57 am Title: Oh, I Can Take It.
Woah !!! smoochies on first date... YUMMI!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D great chapi by the way :D lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2010 03:05:00 am Title: Is It Possible You Got Smaller?
LMAO i would sooo be kiro with the saying the wrong things at the wrong time situation!!! Lol