Date: Dec 31, 2011 02:11:19 am Title: Chapter 10
D'awwww...wonderful ending! Sweet, hot, sexy...*fans self*
After everything Strify went through with Jerkface, I'm so glad he found someone as loving & caring as Shin. :)
Author's Response: Awwww. I'm so glad that you liked it. *flutters eyelashes*
Yeah, me too. Love. xx
Date: Dec 29, 2011 07:28:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
*points at you* PERVERT!
Or as you like to put it... "pervy" XD
I see Strify enjoyed the moment quite a bit. Still... that condom thing... ah well, you're the writer.
I enjoyed it (as you well know).
Thank you for sharing... and I just now remembered that I have an alternative idea to this one o_O
NO! NO! GO BACK TO BABYLONIA JOANA. GO BACK!!! >.
Author's Response: Hahaha. He did indeed.
Oh yes... bwahahaha. Let's see if it shall leave you alone.:P
Date: Dec 29, 2011 03:50:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aww that was an amazing conclusion to such a great story! I'm glad Strify did 'it' ^-^ That whole scene was like OoO YES! Ahaha
Sad it's over :(
Loved this story! :)
Author's Response: YAY!!
I am glad that you think so. Thanks for loving it!! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. xx
Date: Oct 02, 2011 09:00:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
So instead of working on my Ed. paper, I decided to read this... and well... definitely worth it.
Sweet and hot at the same time. Just perfect.
I hope more is in the works already. I love this. ^_^
Author's Response: Indeed there is! I just finished a paper fo my own, and now I can write on this guilt free! =) xx
Date: Sep 30, 2011 03:42:22 am Title: Chapter 9
What?! You ended it there!!!
This was very hot and sweet all in one.
I especially loved these lines... "“I’m entitled to a change of opinion...” he breathed.
“I’m glad that you know your rights...” Shin said to him
Author's Response: *ducks*
There will be more soon. Much, much more. =)
YAY! I liked those lines too. Haha. =)
Thankyouuu. *hugs* xx
Date: Sep 28, 2011 06:01:32 am Title: Chapter 9
Shinnna! You can't just leave it there! It isn't fair! I still love the "As you wish" line. It makes me smile! And I'm glad our pretty little Strify is moving on...
Author's Response: It shalln't be left there for long... I certainly can not resist... xD
Date: Sep 03, 2011 02:35:38 am Title: Chapter 8
"We are not having sex on my piano."
But that's such a hot idea...*whines along with Strify*
Great chapter...loved the way they sat at the piano together & bonded even more with each other. :)
Author's Response: Hahahahaa. I know... Pianos are a personal fetish of mine. I want it too. We'll have to see. :P
YAY for bonding!!!
Thanks for the review. *hugs* xx
Date: Sep 01, 2011 11:25:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
*fangirl eyes* *.* Do you have any idea of how incredibly hot this chapter is?
... what a question, of course you do :P BUT STILL!!!!
I really loved the words you used... this is really well written (I know all you write is good but I especially like this chapter) it seems like you were truly inspired when you wrote it and I love that :D
Or maybe I just really missed reading something yours ^_^
I LEARN A NEW WORD!!! YAY!!! "la-the-ring" :D *cheers*
Author's Response: I love how impressed by this you seem. I wasn't aware it was that hot, actually. Nor that well written... :P It felt more like a filler, actualy. I just kept trying to drag it out until it was a passable length to post. Hahaha. I am glad you enjoyed it. YAY for new words. Loveyou. xx
Date: Sep 01, 2011 09:36:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww, for me?! Yay!
I adore this chapter and I would now very much like Shin to teach me to play the piano too!! ;)
Hehe...and I love how Strify is determined to have sex on the piano...kinky boy! ;)
Author's Response: Yessss. *hugs*
I once had a dream where Shin was teaching me to play the piano... it is a very nice thing indeed. :P
Ohyes... I enjoy giving Strify my kinks. They seem to suit him well. Haha. Thanks youuuu. xx
Date: Aug 04, 2011 10:15:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
I think the words "some sort of emotional effect" on me don't really do this justice. Not at all. I stand by what I said in my previous review: this story is overwhelmingly powerful, beautiful and terrifying at the same time. Jake is a monster, yes, but his characterisation is perfect, well-attuned to the tone of the story, and though he is a total and utter bastard, he is an intriguing, and wonderfully portayed character (if that makes sense without sounding sadistic). I love this story to death, and I love you for writing such an amazing, powerful, and provocative piece of literature. It's truly amazing, and I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: OhThankYou! *gushes* I am so glad that you think Jake is interesting. His characterisation scares me in that I never had to actually 'mould' him. I never had to think about who he was or what he would do or say. He came to me fully formed and always just... was. That unnerves me, that that kind of person comes from me so effortlessly. His bits are the easiest to write as they just flow. Oh Dear.
*loves* Thankye. More soon. =) xx
Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:14:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Jake is truly disgusting!
I hope he dies with a terrible desiese that makes him suffer greatly *growls*
Yu and I hate on him.... oh you have no idea.
This did have an emotional effect on me :( You know that already... but it is still shocking to read.
Author's Response: I know. =(
Yeah, that's good then. I mustn't have failed. ;) *loves you*
Date: Aug 03, 2011 01:29:08 am Title: Chapter 7
Grrr...'monster' doesn't even begin to cover how evil Jerkface is. This is the kind of guy who should be castrated with a pair of rusty scissors.
Okay, now that I've got that out of my system...
"I'll watch over you..." awww...that just makes my heart melt. Shin is so sweet & I'm glad Strify has him.
Author's Response: Oh, I know... =(
Castrated with rusty scissors... Yea...And cut his heart out with a spoon... because it's dull and will hurt more. xD
Naaaaw. I'm glad somebody noticed that line. It was one of my favourites. Shin is a darling. Strify deserves it. xx
Date: Aug 02, 2011 10:09:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Jake deserves worse than what Strify did to him. He deserves a lot worse... Prison comes to mind...
Anyway, this chapter was very well written and disturbing.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, I know. That discussion is on its way. :P
I think he deserves to be deboned, and be left as a blob of flesh just sitting there still self aware. Forever.
Buuut, anywho... I am glad that you found it well written. *dances*
Date: Aug 02, 2011 06:57:09 am Title: Chapter 6
This story is amazing. It really makes me feel for the characters, and I absolutely adore Strify and Shin's relationship in it. Major kudos to you. ^_^
Author's Response: *cuddles*
I'm so glad that it can do that for you. That means a lot.
Aw, me too. I want somebody to love me like that. *hugs* xx
Date: Aug 01, 2011 01:09:32 am Title: Chapter 6
I kept expecting Jake to pop up somewhere like some horror film killer, but I'm so glad he didn't & Strify made it home to Shin.
Very nice chapter. :)
Author's Response: HAHA! Jake is very much like that. He even does it in the next chapter. (Which is anything but nice.) :P
I am glad that you enjoyed it. The next will be up in a few days. *hugs* xx
Date: Jul 31, 2011 11:11:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
This story really makes me feel. I love it, intensely, and I apologise for not reviewing before, please forgive me? But yeah. This story just...has so much passion, and power. It's amazing how heart-wrenching and beautiful it is. Fantastically written, brilliantly sublime. I absolutely adore it. I can't wait to read the next chapter ^^
Author's Response: *squishy hugs*
I can't tell you how amazing that makes me feel. That's the thing that has been concerning me most about this fic. I was afraid it would fall short of what I wanted it to be. =)
Next bit will be up in a few days. =) *hugs* xx
Date: Jul 31, 2011 01:06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is a review! This review loves you for giving it this story! No seriously, Loved it, Shin is soooo cute! :3
Author's Response: *pets review*
I am very glad. Yeah, Shin is an absolute sweetheart.
Next bit will be up in a few days. *hugs* xx
Date: Jul 31, 2011 03:42:58 am Title: Chapter 6
You know Yu is just about to Kill, right? *giggles*
I really like this story, even if it is kind of disturbing and painful :( but *kills a fly* the way you write it makes me want to read more and more.
I am curious to know what you will come up with next (for this fic) :)
Author's Response: Painful and disturbing. Yes. YAY. More soon. =)
Date: Apr 19, 2011 05:37:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
You're a teacher! Then shame on you for making me neglect my homework.
You really shouldn't tempt poor innocent little students that way, it's not very nice, haha, nah I'm just messing with you. I just couldn't resist:)
You know what, I have six more months of school then I'll also be a teacher so I guess it should be shame on me for this very, very bad behaviour.
I just can't seem to help it:)
And btw you should give me more chapters so I'll have a valid reason to why I'm not studying, that would be highly appreciated, haha.
Author's Response: Ha. I have six more months of Uni too... So, I'll use that excuse.
More chapters will be soon... though in a week I have another month of prac in a school.
That either means I wont be writing much... or i'll be writing heaps in way of procrastination! We shall see.
Date: Apr 19, 2011 03:49:24 am Title: Chapter 5
YES! Omg, I'm so proud of both you and Strify! GO STRIFY!!!!
-Sniffles- Im just...so proud! -Smothers with love-
Author's Response: YAAAYY!!
Yay for Strify and Yay for love!
Liebe Dich Auch! xx
Date: Apr 18, 2011 04:27:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy!
I saw that you had updated this and I was like "screw homework, I'm reading this instead", and yeah I'm pretty sure it's the best decision I have made today.
Yes! Strify got revenge. I have to say that I was a little bit nervous in the begining, I thought that it was no way in hell Strify would get out of there.
And Jake, what a stupid boy that is.
He is handcuffed to a bed and can't move and Strify is pissed at him.
And what does the stupid little boy do then? Oh yeah, he starts to piss him of even more. Good move Jake, really, good move!
You go Strify!!!
Yeah, this is amazing as always. I don't think that you can write bad even if you tried. Lucky you:)
Author's Response: Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy, Greatest review! That made me so happy. xD
Ooooh, I can tempt people from homework! Score! (Is a bad thing for a teacher to say. Ooops.)
Bwahahahaa! I'm glad you enjoyed Strify's revenge. I had hoped it would be good enough. =D
I'm glad you enjoyed it over all. YAY!! Thanks for the brilliant review. xx
Date: Apr 18, 2011 03:41:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh gosh!...Strify did it...yaya!...*is wanting to hug Strify for being brave* teehee...*points* haha Jake *sticks out tongue*...im glad it turned out this way...aww cute Shin with his text message *giggles*...i have to say this was amazingly written...i loved it...*hugs* luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: YAY!
I'm so glad that you liked it.
I love cute Shin too. Yay.
There's more to come yet!!
Date: Apr 18, 2011 03:35:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
O M G .... THAT WAS AMAZING.... BRAVO STRIFY IM SO PROUD FOR YOU....GREAT JOB.... THAT WAS THE BEST REVENGE EVER.... THE BEST CHAPTER THAT I HAVE READ EVER!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: YAY!!!
I'm so glad that you liked it and thought the revenge was decent. =)
Thanks for the brilliant review. =D
Date: Apr 04, 2011 08:20:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ahh! I really love this! Anyways, greetings from Germany! (I am in Germany... it is.... weird! I live in a weird family.. they feed me with... weird... German stuff... and they try to speak with me.. in GERMAN! ;_; Ich kann nicht sprechen deutsch...
Author's Response: Hahaha! Fantastic. German food is great.
I'm glad you love this. <3 LOVELY! xx
Date: Apr 01, 2011 10:45:22 am Title: Chapter 4
This is amazing!
I need to know what will happen NOW! I seriously can't wait, I'm like jumping up and down in my chair right now.
I wish Strify could just run away from Jake really, really fast. That would make me a happy girl.
Buuut... I'm sure you wouldn't write it like that even if I baked you the biggest cake ever! So I will patiently wait and see what awesome things you come up with for the next chapter.
I love this so much!!!
Author's Response: Awwwww! Thank yoooouuu. I love your reviews so much!!
...I like cake. =D
*pets* More shall be up for you soon.
I'm glad that you like it so much. Makes it worth it. *hugs* xx
Date: Apr 01, 2011 06:54:23 am Title: Chapter 4
oh gosh i cried for Strify *tear*...i dont like Jake TT.TT i hope Strify gets him back...i loved this wonderfully written too...luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: I cried writing it, too. I don't like Jake either. =(
I am glad you loved it. *hugs* xx
Date: Apr 01, 2011 03:48:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh good GOD!!! a bloody sex shop, I pray to Nyx to keep Strify safe! and Shin is definitely a sweet heart and very trusting!!!
Can't wait to see you come up with next!!! I love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you muchly.
Oh, Yeah. Jake has ideas. Yay for Shin being amazing. <3
More for you soooooon. *hugs* xx
Date: Apr 01, 2011 03:21:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Get him Strify! XD I feel bad for Strify, but at the same time, I'm glad that Jake is about to get his...What is it with bad guys with J names anyways?
Author's Response: Yeah, all my bad guys tend to have J names. I don't know why. :/
Liebe Dich Auch. xx
Date: Apr 01, 2011 12:12:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Yu just decided that he is going to kill Jake.
I am still trying to calm him down after this chapter... You are so evil!
Look at the poor boy! (Yu)
Author's Response: Yeah, Yu is totally not the one I'm feeling sorry for right now.
Date: Mar 23, 2011 08:36:35 am Title: Chapter 3
I don't have a good feeling about this... *is nervous*
I'll give you 5* just because of Yu :D
This changes my approach completely!
Author's Response: Oh, you focus on th smallest little things. xD
Date: Mar 23, 2011 01:22:06 am Title: Chapter 3
oh gosh oh gosh!!!...no no no Strify dont go...*tear*...teehee Yu was ready to hurt somebody for a minute there...nawww cute and caring Shin ftw...at least Kiro was not ignored to much this time *giggles*...i cant wait for more... but im worried too what is going to happen to Strify ...hmm...*waits patiently for next chapter...excited* luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: Yep. Yu was all ready to get protective. =D
Oh, I love cute and caring Shin too. He's so sweet.
You must trust Strify. ;)
More for you soon.
Date: Mar 23, 2011 12:55:45 am Title: Chapter 3
STRIFY!!!! YOU BLOODY IDIOT!! YOU SHOULD OF JUST LEFT HIM IN THE MIDDLE OF A DANCE TO KISS SHIN!!!
I have faith you Strify but doing that was completely idiotic!!! You better know what your doing cause if you get hurt I don't know what I would do!!!
Author's Response: *hugs*
Thank you so much for your fantastic review. =)
Ohh.. Yeah... Strify... I wouldn't have done that. :/
Date: Mar 22, 2011 07:57:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
I totally would not go home with Jake, for revenge reasons or otherwise, but I understand it's Strify's way of confronting his demons. My hatred for Jake has definitely increased since the previous chapter, so I really do hope he gets what he deserves. Awesome chapter though hun. ^_^
Author's Response: I wouldn't either. HELL NO!
Ooh. I totally hate that guy. Hate Hate Hate.
I'm glad you like. =D Thank youuu.
Date: Mar 22, 2011 04:41:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is so good. I freaking love it!
He left with him!!!
Strify what are you doing? Are you insane? I guess I'm like Yu on this one, I just don't get it.
I really hope that you won't hurt Strify, because that would just be mean. Very, very mean :P
But I also get the feeling that Jake could get violent and I'm not sure that Strify is such a good fighter (I don't know, I just can't picture him fighting).
He'll get his revenge, right?
But anyway, I really want to read next chapter because I love this!
Author's Response: I hate hurting Strify. It's harder for me than anything else and I always cry. I have no control mostly. This story just tells me what is going to happen. He'll totally get his revenge though. I love your reviews *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 15, 2011 05:01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I still think this is written wonderfully. I'm sure you're going to make me cry before this is over...probably more than once. Ich Liebe Dich xxx
Author's Response: Well, I hope so. But I don't think it has the same... something That Forgiven Nor Forgotten had... Love you. xx
Date: Mar 15, 2011 01:10:09 am Title: Chapter 2
want more!!! Jake needs to get what he deserves, he's so disgusting!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope he's as disgusting as he was in the prequal... I'm trying to make him worse. xD More shall be up soon. =) Thanks for the review. *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 14, 2011 05:38:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
of course u sould give us more.... and please make Jake pay for all this bad things he made to Strify.... Strify must take a revenge..... Go for it Strify,be strong....
Author's Response: I will try toget the 3rd up today. =) *hugs*
Date: Mar 14, 2011 01:08:06 am Title: Chapter 2
oh gosh...i do not like Jake at all, not one little bit, nope...*grrr* he hurt Strify...*tear*...hehe poor Kiro getting ignored *giggles*...wow Yu got fired up o.O ...oh sweet caring Shin ftw ^.^...cant wait for more...and wonderfully written aswell...luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: *huggles* I love you you pick out all the little bits I put in. =) Yay!! Thanks for the review, lovely. xx
Date: Mar 13, 2011 09:31:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
THAT'S RIGHT STRIFY!!! DON'T GIVE IN TO THE PRICK!!!! YOU ARE JACK E. STRIFY!!!! NOTHING BUT CONFIDENCE, PRIDE, LEADER, SINGER AND BITCHINESS!!!!
And I think Yu should've beat him into a bloody pulp and lolz I liked it when Kiro said he looked like Yu but I don't think anyone was listening to him
I love it!!!
Author's Response: *cuddles* Thank you so much. I'm glad this gets that much of a reaction from you. Haha. Yes. Nobody listens to Kiro's little comments. =) *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 13, 2011 09:18:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jake disgusts me too, and you know how much...
Yu is bothering me to write something but my mom has the TV on an I can't concentrate :(
Yu just wait... My head is hurting.
"Oh it is? Come here baby" he hugged me "let me cuddle you" and he smiled.
Mmm... thank you darling. ^_^
Author's Response: Yu sure is nice to you... *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 12, 2011 02:01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, poor Strify! I just wanted to hug him. But I'm glad he has Shin to look after him.
I read the other story & wondered if you would write a sequel. I'd like to see Strify get some kind of revenge on the scummy ex.
Author's Response: Yepp. =) That's what this is for. I couldn't leave Strify like that without him getting some form of revenge. *hugs him* Yay. Thanks for the review. *hugs for you* xx
Date: Mar 12, 2011 12:48:18 am Title: Chapter 1
OH GOTT!!! I read the other story but I hated it!!! well I liked it but I loathed what Jake did to Strife!!! and Jake will never be in my good books!!!
But I have to say you have great idea's for story lines!!! keep writing cause you are so brilliant!!!
Author's Response: Jake will never be good in my books either. He's scum. Thank you so much. =) *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 12, 2011 12:32:31 am Title: Chapter 1
ohh...poor Strify *huggles him close*...'CinemaHotel' you write soo beautiful...did you know that...i love this soo much...im sad to hear that it hurt you to write it...i hope things get better for you truly...luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: AW. You're so sweet. Thank you very much. =) Oh, yes. Poor Strify. =( *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 11, 2011 05:34:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I confess I didn't read everything again but... damn I have the file so I can read it whenever I want! *cheers*
I am still going to write the other version of this, you know?
Again... poor Strify :( I just wanna cuddle him ;Q
Author's Response: Yay. Yeah, I look forward to reading it. *cuddles with you.* xx