Date: Feb 13, 2011 07:32:58 am Title: Chapter 4
aaww poor Shin *snuggles him* I love him equally as much as Kiro and he's so freaken adorable like him too! I feel sorry for the other guys too
Author's Response: *awwww* Strify's my favourite, but i love Shin too! :D
Date: Feb 13, 2011 06:50:46 am Title: Chapter 1
DAMN ROMEO! I never did like him for some reason even though that's when I got into CB when he joined. but that's not the point my point is when I finally ordered Final Attraction and picked it up. I somehow became automatically more interested in Luminor than in Romeo. moving on great head start to this story.
Author's Response: *nods* luminor is much better, i think. Romeo never really seemed to fit in with the band.
Date: Oct 07, 2010 04:00:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
*smiles* Oh my God! This is the first time that I'm actually smiling in this story!! *blushes* YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! I love the ending, and I do hope they'll get back together, just like we all do. Just now, on this line;
"….Romeo had never really fit in…." I realized that it's true. He really does NOT fit in, he's waaaaaaaaaay to ordinary for them! *giggles* I want Lumi!!! And his sexy, scary voice!!! *claps*
Great story Sarah and Loren! I reeeeeeally loved it!!!!!! *hugs you both*
Author's Response: *claps* yayyy!!! i'm so glad we made you smile!!!!
that's the perfect way to describe him! Ordinary...and you're right, Lumi does have a sexy but scary voice!!!
*hugs* so happy you liked it!!!
Date: Oct 07, 2010 03:46:10 pm Title: Chapter 6 *edited*
I have no words right now... I just hate Romeo currently. I can't even stand looking at his photo. *sigh* I just hope that stuff like that didn't happend in real life. *crosses fingers*
Author's Response: *hugs* i'm pretty sure it didn't happen in real life, so it's alright!!!
Date: Oct 03, 2010 05:34:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
No, thank YOU for writing this amazing story. The ending was perfect.
And I still love that picture. Looking at it makes me feel all fuzzy inside, like it's only a matter of time before they get back together... It's the same kind of feeling this chapter gives me. ^_^
Author's Response: *blushes* awwww thank you!!!! And me too...it's a great feeling!!!
Date: Oct 03, 2010 02:44:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my are you serious? *.*
Well since you asked ;) If you include in the story it would be great!
You can choose what it is about because I trust you that much as a writer :D
Oh my I cant believe you are considering writing a story because of me!!!
*feels extremely special and loved*
Uuuuuuuh!!!!! *jumps around*
I love you! ;D
Author's Response: *hugs* awww, i feel so privledged!!!!
Well...i'll do some serious thinking over the next few days for your story!!!! :P
*hugs* i'm soooo excited to be writing you a story! You're such an amazing person and so nice!!!!
*laughs* awww i love you too! ^-^
Date: Oct 03, 2010 10:25:15 am Title: Chapter 1
That would be so cool!
Ich liebe dich! *smoosh*
Author's Response: Ich liebe dich auch! i'm actually listening to his new band right now. Even though i don't like Romeo as a person for a few reasons, i will say that he has a very smooth, mesmerising voice.
Now, what would you like your story to be about?
Date: Oct 02, 2010 02:47:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
I LOVE ROMEO!!!! ROMEO ROMEO ROMEO ROMEO ROMEO ROMEO ROMEO RO... well you get the point ;)
Author's Response: *laughs and claps* That was such a cute review! I really giggled when i saw it!!! Perhaps i can write you a Romeo story? A nice one i promise
Date: Oct 02, 2010 02:36:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sorry but this is something that did not happen.
Romeo is a really nice lad and it was Luminor who had a problem with the Cinema Bizarre boys; not Romeo.
But I understand it's just a fiction so... *deep breath* I'm good :)
Even because I still love you :D
Author's Response: *hugs* Yeah, it's just fanfiction, promise! I'm sorry if i upset you in any way with it, i'm not making accusations just putting up a possible reason why the band broke up. It could have been done the other way around with Luminor as the agressor, i just felt Luminor made a better victem. But i am pleased that you still like me!!! YAY!!!
Date: Oct 01, 2010 10:53:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yes!!! The boys are back together, all is love and all is perfect XD Sorry, I'm feeling a little hyper right now. Must be because I'm stupidly tired, but I can't be bothered to go to bed. ANYWAY!! I love this ending so much more, especially with the photo. I adore Strify's hair. Like, I'm in love with it XD Oh, but the chapter!! I'm so happy the boys are back together. I hope this points to great things our way :D And you're so right - Romeo never did fit in. Not at all *pouts*
I love this, and I have to give Yu a big hug for being brave enough to come back and admit that he was wrong (after a fashion, lol, he took his sweet time). And for the rest of the guys, cause I love them all to pieces and I want them back!!!
Strify's hair...so nice...
ANYWAY!! Loved the ending, of course! *hugs* and *fangirl squeal* and I'm off to...um...I don't know. Probably review INVU xD *Waves* Later, Sarah!
Author's Response: *laughs* youíre so hyper!!!!! Yeah, i do that sometimes...i know iím tired, but thereís just too much to do!!!!
*Nods happily* Strifyís hair is just incredible!!!! And yeah, Romeo was a really wierd outsider!
I agree though, Yu was brave enough to come back but youíre right! 8 months is waaayyyy too long!!!
*laughs* iíll give his hair to you then!!!!
*laughs* have fun reviewing, then make sure you get some sleep! As the older twin, you have to do what i say!!!
Date: Oct 01, 2010 06:48:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
I loved the ending to this. I'm hoping that their weekend together turns into a reunion. Awesome chapter. *hugs* ^_^
Author's Response: *hugs* awwww, YAY! i'm so glad you liked the ending!!! :D
And i hope it does too! It seriously should!!! We miss them wayyy too much
Date: Oct 01, 2010 12:46:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
-Pounces- how cute this chapter was! i just love this story so much; it's so beautiful and wellwritten.
Thank you so much Sarah and Loren for writing it! and for posting that adorable picture at the end!!!
Now...i must read some more stories on here! Do you have any recommendations?
Author's Response: *hugs* awww thanks Caroline!!!! I'm glad you liked it so much!!! :D
well, you've already said in Luna's review some authors you like, but i also like Beautifully Meaningful, Angel in Disguise, Lovegame90, KawaiiKiro, Emo Cutting Rose, Kiroprincess and about a million others!!!!!!!!!!!!! Check some out for yourself or i recommend looking at the top tens and browsing through there
Date: Oct 01, 2010 12:45:04 pm Title: Chapter 6 *edited*
god, i think Strify and Shin and Yu and Kiro should just get together and get rid of Romeo! he's just plain horrible
But i also think that you've written it really well. I think Yu was very brave to have called them on the phone. But i just hope that everything will go ok.
Oh, does that mean that this isn't the last chapter?
Author's Response: *nods* chapter 7 is the last chapter
Date: Oct 01, 2010 12:40:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
I thought that first few lines were really thought-provoking and eerie.
I liked this chapter but it almost made me cry...it's just so heartbreaking how completely he broke the band into tiny pieces...
...and how it was Yu being raped.
Author's Response: *hugs* wow, thank you!!!!!
Date: Oct 01, 2010 12:37:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
And to answer your question: No, i don't even think you've being disrespectful. Fanfiction is about creating a world where you feel like you can express youself and that's exactly what you're doing here
Author's Response: awwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks so much!!! You made me really happy
Date: Oct 01, 2010 12:33:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think that this story is so intelligent and thoughtful. You and CinemaHotel have put so much effort into it and it really shows in the words...it's amazing
Now onto the review!
I pity Luminor completely...he is so brave and amazing that it's just heartbreaking
Author's Response: awwww thank you so much Caroline! i'm really pleased that you liked it so much
Date: Oct 01, 2010 12:31:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god...this is purely amazing! i fell in love instantly...it was just jawdropping
I wonder who it is being raped? I have my ideas but i don't want to say incase i'm wrong
Author's Response: *hugs* thanks so much
Date: Oct 01, 2010 09:10:39 am Title: Chapter 7
awwwwwwwwwww that pic is just adorable! i am totally in love with it!!!!
Besides, this ending was just perfect...it makes me so optomistic
Author's Response: *laughs* awww me too!!!!
And actually, i think it makes me optomistic too
Date: Oct 01, 2010 08:15:14 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG! I absolutely love the ending. And I always knew I hated Romeo for a reason...even if this is only meant to be a fanfic. Lol.
ps: I love Strify's hair too. Fluffiness FTW! XP
Author's Response: *hugs* ohhh you made my day!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!! And i know what you mean!!!!
*laughs* Oh i know! its such an epic win!!!!!!
Date: Oct 01, 2010 07:14:19 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, i love that photo!!!! I really hope that you're right, that they do get back together!!!
I think Romeo is an idiot, and one of these days he'll wake up to that fact and stop hurting people (i love that part Loren said)
Author's Response: me too!!!! *flails*
Date: Oct 01, 2010 06:37:05 am Title: Chapter 7
"Shin smiled a little, rolling his eyes. He grabbed hold of Yu, slinging his arms around the guitarists shoulders. Kiro stepped in behind them and Strify stood at the front. He grabbed his camera, taking a quick snapshot."
...I'm still SQUEE-ING!!
Author's Response: *hugs* Awwwwwwwwwwww, me too!!!! it's so sweet!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: Sep 30, 2010 09:24:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
*cries* HOW COULD HE??!!! HOW DARE HE??!! *screams and trashes*
So, that mother fucker raped Shin, Lumi AND Yu?? Am I right?! *groans* I hate Romeo right now. I seriously do. *feels sad* I've wrote one story with him, where he's, I dunno happy I think, in pleasure, but right now, I'm going to rewrite it. *nods* Oh how I will!! I'll probably enjoy every second of it! *grins* Maybe I'll write some story where I'll kill him. Yeah, I think I'll do. He'll be in soooooo much pain!! *smirks*
Honestly, in this chapter, when the flashback ended, the first think I thought was- Yu's being raped.
And guess what, I was right... *glares at Romeo's pic* I REALLY hate that dude!
But it was still a great chapter!
Author's Response: *hugs* yeah, unfortunately he did...i mean, i don't know if he really DID IN REAL LIFE but in tis story, yeah?!
8hugs* i'm sorry honey!!! don't rewrite it on account of me!!!
*hugs* that'll be awesome though; i'd love to read a story where he dies
*laughs* i think most people were like that!!!!
*snuggles* thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Sep 30, 2010 12:57:29 am Title: Chapter 6 *edited*
I love you guys. Seriously. GAH. This story is amazing. You guys are amazing.
I will never look at Romeo the same way again.
When I started reading this chapter, I expected it to end with them taking the picture of them that Yu posted on Twitter a couple days ago... That would have been perfect.
But this is great. *hugs*
Author's Response: OH WOW! well, when i wrote this chapter the photo hadn't been taken yet but i completely LOVE the idea *runs to change ending*
Thank you so much!!!!
Date: Sep 30, 2010 12:49:29 am Title: Chapter 5
*wipes tears* Poor Shin.....
I really love the psychology of this. I don't know if it's done on purpose, or if I'm reading too much into it, but there's a lot of psychological stuff in here, and it makes the story much deeper.
And I didn't see it coming that it was Yu being raped. At first, I thought it was Lumi, then I thought it was Shin, and in the last few sentences of the flash back, I got that it was Yu. So don't cry.
You're amazing. Both of you. In unimaginably huge ways. *hugs*
Author's Response: *hugs and wipes away your tears*
Parts of it are on purpose, i tried to think out everything that was being written and how it had affected each member...i hope it's ok :D
*hugs* that's ok! i won't cry, you're too nice to make me cry even though you worked it out early!!
*hugs from Sarah and Loren* Thank you so much!!! You're amazing too! your reviews are always delightful and beautiful
Date: Sep 29, 2010 05:37:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! So I just decided to start reading this and I'm already hooked. I think you two are the only ones who can do that... Amazing. :)
Author's Response: *hugs* awwwwwwwwwwww, THANK YOU SO MUCH KATE! Loren and i really appreciate it and we're so happy you like the story
Date: Sep 29, 2010 01:12:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 *edited*
I loved it ^^ Of course. Oh, but I especially loved Luminor's poem. I remember reading what he was doing over myspace, with DNR and stuff...though it annoyed me a little, I admit, because there was a video on there of him singing "Get Off" with DNR. I didn't like that, but Luminor is a free person, entitled to do what he wants, and he seems a little happier now, so that's great :D *hugs him*
Anyway, as for the end, I really loved how you brought it all back together, to the end of Rouge Morgue and to Romeo's betrayal of Yu, the rape, everything was really well presented and wonderfully crafted. I can only hope Yu manages to escape, and I gotta say, that final line is both touching and daunting. Even after everything, it proves that the guys still care about each other, but it also leaves a warning about what could happen with Yu. Which is awesome, cause it leaves the story open for more xD
Well, I'm currently waiting for you to return to msn xD And I will move on and review Crash and Burn in a few minutes. I'm in a crazy writing phase at the moment, and it's going pretty well!! ANYWAY!! XD Love this, *fangirl squeal* *hugs* And I eagerly look forward to every other update!!
Author's Response: *hugs* i think i saw that video too but then i realised that on Final Attraction, lumi was singing it so i kinda assumed it was his song...if that makes sense, but you're right about him being happier now!
awwww thank you! i'm so pleased that it came around in a circle!!! And i love the last line too, though i didnt know if it should have ended like that!
*hugs* hopefully i turned up on msn, i think! LMAO!!! YAY WRITING!!!!!!!!!
Date: Sep 29, 2010 12:54:00 pm Title: Chapter 6 *edited*
This was gorgeous...“And shin?” Kiro smiled. “Rosetta isn’t weird. She’s a part of you so she’s beautiful, caring, passionate and strong. Don’t let Romeo or Yu bring you down for doing something you believe in….for being someone you want to be.”
Shin blinked, tears in his eyes.
“Look at all our fans, their support on your Myspace,” Kiro pointed out. “Romeo and Yu were wrong. Rosetta isn’t hurting Cinema Bizarre, she’s making the fans want us back even more.”
Anyway, i really liked the ending...but you sort of left it hanging...will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: *hugs8 thanks! Loren wanted Shin to know that we all love Rosetta and that she's beautiful and not pathetic like Romeo said...there might be a sequel
Date: Sep 29, 2010 12:50:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Dear god, how i hate ROmeo in this
Poor poor Shin! i can't believe Luminor's phone was disconnected, how that would have come across to Shin in his time of need...
Rifling around, Shin pulled out his penknife and began to make crimson reminders, tiny cuts on his arms that no one but Romeo saw...and the keyboardist didn’t even care...
I care about you, Shin and we don't wnat you hurting yourself
Author's Response: *nods* imagine how that must have seemed to Shin *sad*
He'll be ok, i promise
Date: Sep 29, 2010 12:12:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
How would the band be able to function now?
Romeo had ruined everything.
He stood up, storming over and slapping the keyboardist across the face.
Ok, first i was like almost crying then i was like Boo-YA!!! AWESOME!!!
Now, i hope that Romeo gets what's coming to him in the next chapter
Author's Response: hopefully he will....
Date: Sep 29, 2010 11:27:20 am Title: Chapter 5
I didn't see that coming at all; i was like it must be romeo and yu. It's a great concept!!!
I'm just sad that everyone is affected bu how much of a loser he is
Author's Response: *hugs* wow, thank you so much
Date: Sep 28, 2010 08:20:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
ew does that mean romeo and suzy are together? because that's just disgustingggggggggggggggg. they can't be 'cause he's a rapist. ICKKKKK! hurry up and finish and please tell me it ends good.
Author's Response: *hugs* no no no, it's ok!!!! Romeo is with No one!!! *mwahahhahhaaaa*
I'll update now, but i really hope everyone likes it
Date: Sep 28, 2010 01:51:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
WHOAAA!!! That was so goddamned amazing (I would have used a stronger word there, but you're not allowed to swear in reviews...lol...that makes me sound like such a nice, neat girl XD). I never once thought that it was Yu being raped! I thought that it was still Romeo and Luminor...oh my god, that was amazing! XD XD Can you tell how much I liked it?? LOVED IT!!! I loved it! I might explode. Seriously.
Anyway, anyway, after all my craziness about how much I loved it, I wanted to leap straight into the story and hug Shin until he burst. I love how you've brought it around to the way the band divided, so now I'm curious to know what's going to happen with Yu and Romeo. I can't wait!! *bounces* Based on just this chapter, the end is going to be freaking awesome! *flails* Wow, I sound like a creepy fangirl...wait, I AM a creepy fangirl!!
I hope someone saves Yu! Even if he was being an arse...but I like Yu more than Romeo, so...save him!! Please?? O.O LOL, I can't wait to read the end XD XD *hugs* *fangirl squeal* MORE!! Need the last chapter, like...NOW!
Author's Response: Are you really not allowed to swear in reviews? Wow!!!
*le gasp* OHHHH!!!! Now i'm hugging YOU for the rest of the year and not letting go!!!!!!!!
awwww, i think Shin would appreciate the hugs but not the bursting!
*hugs& THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU NIKKI!!!!!!!!!!
&laughs* well i am too!!!!
Nawwwwwwwww, i hope he does get saved too!!!! *shakes head* You'll have to wait, little-miss-impatient!!!
Date: Sep 28, 2010 12:00:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm pleased that Shin had the guts to stand up to Romeo like Luminor did, but a little sad it resulted in the split of the band
i can't wait for the final chapter to see how you tie it all together
Author's Response: *nods* awwww thanks
Date: Sep 28, 2010 09:41:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Shin looked like he had been slapped and he stared into Romeo’s cold eyes.
“The way you look and dressed last night and how drunk you were,” He smirked. “It could have been anyone who hit you. I would never have done that!”
“I’ve known Romeo for two years now,” he said. “And he would never do those things you described Shin. I think you were drunk.”
“Thanks Yu,” he looked at Shin carefully. “And you really fucking shouldn’t wear that girl outfit. It makes you look so slutty. It’s bad for the band’s image.”
“Shut the fuck up!” Strify shouted. “Because you know what? I fucking believe him. I’ve seen the way you look at him, the way that Luminor would always cower when you came into the room.”
AHH! I always cheer at that bit!!
I'd pay money to see Strify tell Romeo to 'shut the fuck up'.
Author's Response: I'd pay to see strify slap, hit, kill, tell romeo to shut the fuck up or stab him with a pimp stick!!!! :D
Date: Sep 26, 2010 02:53:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
*gasp* WHAT??!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Leave Shin alone, you idiot!!!!! Don't hurt him, please!! *sobs* No!! He's pure, and innocent and he must stay like that. You can't do that to Shinnie!! You just can't!!!!!! *cries*
*grabs a knife and threatends Romeo* I WILL kill him if you girls won't!
"Rifling around, Shin pulled out his penknife and began to make crimson reminders, tiny cuts on his arms that no one but Romeo saw...and the keyboardist didn’t even care..."
This just breaks my heart... *blinks back tears*
Author's Response: *laughs* oh nooooooo, it's ok dearest!!!!!!!!!! GO ON THREATENING HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hugs* i promise you that Shin will be ok
Date: Sep 26, 2010 02:39:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
*cries* Oh my God!!! ROMEO YOU'RE A FUCKING LOSER!!!!!!!!!!!!! You hear me, you jerk??!! L-O-S-E-R! *screams and trashes*
I can't believe he would do such thing. It's disgusting, stupid and normal people fuck each other from love or lust, which means that that guy is not normal!! I hate him so much right now!!!! *cries*
Author's Response: OH NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *soothes* Calm down, my dearest Marija!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs tightly*
*sobs with you* I'm sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Sep 26, 2010 02:27:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay... Now, I'm seriously starting to suspect that it's Romeo's fault that the band broke up. *nods sadly*
Also, I didn't knew that there was a huge fight between Romeo and Shin about Shin dressing up as Rosetta. He dropped on my list from the people I love, right now, he's at the bottom. *glares at the raven-head*
Yeah, I'm definately thinking that it's Romeo's fault right now. Oh, how I wish I knew the truth!! *longs* ://
Author's Response: *nods* yeah, i think it's his fault. I mean, not completely but he definately had something to do with their breaking up :(
They had a fight on twitter about it!!!!
Date: Sep 25, 2010 04:51:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
fjgadsnl;gjdskal;fndlasjg as *wipes tears* Holy crap, you've left me damn near in tears every single chapter.
I was upset when Romeo was just going after Luminor, but now that he's going after Shin, sweet, innocent Shin, I'm about to go crazy.
So you should post more. Soon. Yup.
Author's Response: *hugs* awww, i'm sorry!!! *hugs tighter and wipes your tears*
I agree with you there...i want to push him off a cliff, but as far as i know, he hasn't been in real life so i don't think i can >.<
New chapter up now :D
Date: Sep 25, 2010 04:34:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
*punches Romeo* Sorry, sorry, I had to do that :D He's being such an arse! And now he's started hurting poor Shin *cuddles Shin* Don't worry Shin!! We'll rescue you! Anyway, anyway, I love how this is progressing, you can see how the band is slowly unravelling, and everything is taking its toll on them. I can't wait to see what's coming next. *bounces* No worries about the wait, by the way, it's all good xD Awesome chapter, of course.
Damn, I know how you feel with all these pc issues. I've just moved into my uni accomodation, and the internet access is so stingy!! It's awful! *sigh* But I can still access this, so it's not too bad. Anyway, no worries, take as much time as you need, and good luck.
Author's Response: *laughs* it's ok you want to punch him!!!
*nods* i think he definately will need the cuddles!!!
Thank you!!! i'm so glad you can see the band unravelling, it makes me happy...though that sounds EVIL!!!
Wish i was at Uni with you, then we wouldn't need to talk on internet, which probably sounds creepier than intended :(
Date: Sep 23, 2010 02:56:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Dont worry about it because you are an amazing writer no one will hold it aganst you... im guessing its Shinna's turn to write the next chapter??
Author's Response: *nods* thank you very much!
Actually, Loren didn't "write" this story. she helped me with the idea and edited it for me so...i don't know...
Date: Sep 22, 2010 10:15:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
Maybe I'm reading too much into it (It's my AP Lit class that makes me do it, I swear.) but I love the psychological aspect of this story. Luminor feels guilty for things that are out of his control, and he doesn't feel good enough to protect the band. And Romeo is just a whole mess of problems that I can't properly diagnose because I am not a liscensed professional.
And so Romeo becomes a villian just as evil as Mikhail from INVU. And I hope, just like Mikhail, Romeo gets his just deserts.
Author's Response: *nods and swoons* ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am soooo happy that you like it and are kinda-sorta analysing it a little!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Sep 21, 2010 12:23:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh man, Romeo is an arsehole. Have I already expressed the desire for him to die a horrible, nasty death? I'll say it again anyway, even though it won't happen xD Oh, but I don't think it's disrespectful at all, it's a story and what's within it is necessary towards the story's development. So, you write what you feel you need to write ^^ As for the chapter itself, I'm loving how carefully you're taking everything - as in, like, moving steadily through the time, punctuating the present with the past and clashing them against each other...it's awesome XD I love your approach to the situation, and I can't wait to see how it's going to end. Next chapter please!!! *hugs*
By the way, I hope I'm not being irritating or anything, but is there a particular time you want to set up so that we can chat over MSN about Doden? I never received the email (goddamned msn...) so I don't have the second chapter. It's okay if you're busy and stuff, I understand, lol. Let me know what time (your time) is best, and I'll see if I can get online at the right moment, even if it's only quickly to exchange the file. Plus, I had an idea about chapter three, but I need to read two first XD Does this sound patronising or anything? *hides* I hope it doesn't ^^ See ya later! *hugs*
Author's Response: *hugs8 i think you have mentioned that desire, but it still needs to be repeated more than once!!!
*hugs* i'll have it to you by tonight!!! *flails*
Date: Sep 21, 2010 12:27:49 am Title: Chapter 2
*wipes tears* Poor Luminor... he tries and he tries, but it's all for nothing... he suffered through everything, even got pushed off a boardwalk, and it was for nothing.
Please update this, loves. I cannot wait for more of this twisted tale.
Author's Response: *hugs* i promise we will update soon! AND thank you SO much for liking it!!!!
Date: Sep 21, 2010 12:19:35 am Title: Chapter 1
gnsaklhgfa;lf ndjaslkhgurjhnafdsk holy crap you have me in tears.
Poor Lumi!!!! *bawls* I absolutely adore him, so to think that he could be treated that way is appalling.
Just so you know: seeing an email from CBF saying that my favorite author has posted a new story is awesome. Seeing that two of my favorite authors are writing a story together is freaking amazing.
And I don't mind one bit that you're using Romeo as the bad guy. I don't like him much now anyway....
Author's Response: *sniffles* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am sooo sorry!!! We didn't mean to make you cry, honest!!!
*blush* Omfg! that is just so sweet!!! That's EXACTLY how i feel whenever you update one of your stories!!!!!!!!!!! *melts*
I don't think i ever liked him *shifty eyes*
Date: Sep 20, 2010 02:05:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
*gasp* Romeo! So murderous! *stabs him* Hmm, but I am liking where this is going. I'm looking forward to seeing this play out, watching the events unfold and leading to the demise of the band...I can't wait XD I've heard a lot of rumours about Romeo, so yes, I'm definitely thinking about the story in that way :) Poor Luminor *hugs* he's getting some real crap from Romeo...I hope Romeo gets some kind of punishment..I hope he dies a nasty death XD I know, I know, that's not likely to happen, lol. It's just my wishful thinking *evil grin*
Anyway, loving this, and I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter xD *hugs* See ya later!
Author's Response: *nods* KEEP ON STABBING!!!
Thank you! As an author, i'm looking forward to seeing its development too!!!
*nods* Yeah, i've heard Rumors too...and i just can't bring myself to like him, though in INVU he's being ok for the moment!
*laughs* i hope he does tooooo!!!
Well, i'm loving your reviews, my firend, and wait no more! the next chapter will be up now!!! *hugs*