Date: Jul 20, 2011 04:12:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
I was right. Yu IS in love with Strify. His actions here express nothing but ages of supressed feelings that blurted out all at the same time.
Oh I'm in for a Strify and Yu twist ^^ Even if it hurts Shin :(
Author's Response: Who is a genius?? You are! ;) Really? But Strife is in love! T.T
Date: Jul 20, 2011 12:09:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
I can't believe Yu just did that, I don't even know what to say right now!
Now I really need to find out what's going to happen with them. This chapter was so good!
Author's Response: I can't believe he did it either and I wrote it! Haha. Thank you muches!
Date: Apr 25, 2011 02:20:35 am Title: Chapter 12
*drools* That was amazing! *nods frantically*
Strify is really... And Shin is just... They are both... *whistles* God damn! This was really something! xD
Awwwh!! Shin is so sweet; I just love how careful and thoughtful he is. *hugs him*
Though... Are you guys sure he wasn't a vampire or something in his previous life? I mean, he's been biting Strife all day long! *nods and points*
It was pretty fun though! ^_^
I hope Yu had a great day in the store as his pal had in a shower cabin! *grins*
Author's Response: Hahaha! I don't think anybody could have as good a day as Strify did in the shower... well, I bet Shin did... but yeah! xD
I love how careful and sweet Shin is too. Aww. And, Strify is so wonderfully instructive. Ha.
I am glad you liked this so much... I sure had fun writing it. ;)
Thanks for the review. *hugs* xx
Date: Apr 25, 2011 01:53:10 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh, sweet Jesus! Strify's going man, that's for sure! *laughs* He's creepy sometimes. *nods*
And poor Yuki-kun!! He shooed him out of the door! Evil... *glares*
I gotta read the next chapter!!! *runs* Bye, bye!!! =))
Author's Response: Is it mean to say that I think Yukita deserved it?
Date: Apr 15, 2011 03:34:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
I just HAD to reread this. >.<
Love it. And them. And you.
I don't think I can top this.
You're too awesome T.T
Author's Response: Hahahahaa.
Oh.. I'm sure you can give it your best shot!! ;)
Imaine how smexy THAT competition would be. Bwaha.
Liebe Dich. xx
Date: Apr 14, 2011 03:44:11 am Title: Chapter 12
Ich LIEBE smut. >:3
But really, this was better than a lot of smut I read. A lot. A lot.
Author's Response: Oooh, I'm so glad you appreciated it. =)
If you liked that I suggest you check out one I wrote with Beautifully Meaningful called 'Turn'. Almost every chapter is smut. Haha.
Date: Mar 28, 2011 06:16:36 am Title: Chapter 12
Like is an understatement, your smut was loved! Also, GO SHIN! And poor Strify...it's not fair to either of them that Shin is dead...
Author's Response: Shin totally decided to take over... >.>
Yeah... Shin being dead makes things complicated. =(
Date: Mar 24, 2011 09:31:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
I JUST now started reading this story and let me say, bravo. Its a haunting story that makes just want to continue reading no matter wwhat. I must say, I got yelled at several times today at work for not paying attention and reading this. Both of your writting styles mesh perfectly together. Half the time I couldn't tell who wrote what. It flowed extremly well. I tip my hat to you both! Job excellently done! I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Oh wow. What a fantastic review. Thank you so much. I'm sure KawaiiKiro will be as flattered as I am.
I'm so glad that you liked it that much. I'm also thankful for whoever gave you an earful and told you to read it. Haha xD
I hope we can continue to impress. =)
Thanks for finally reading. =) *hugs* xx
Date: Mar 22, 2011 05:00:49 pm Title: Chapter 12
Strify and Shin are cute!
This part made me laugh:
“I do want to, Strify.”
“Oh...” Strify finally got it.
So good. Well, being dead is normally a very big problem, haha.
This story kind of makes me want my own ghost. Not a creepy one of course. But the ghost could be Strify, Yu, Kiro or Shin. You see, I'm really not that picky at all.
Yep, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hahahahahaaa!!
I would have my own ghost of them too.
I feel like Strify is a lucky boy in this fic. xD
They're totally cute and I'm so glad you are liking this fic. *hugs*
Date: Feb 14, 2011 05:10:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
HEY! Jeeean! Where is the rest? Darling, this is clearly not fair! You're lucky I love you. -nibbles- And, Strify isn't actually really going insane, right? Just thought I would check. Of course, if I thought I could get Shin (or Strify
Author's Response: Hahahahahaha, is TOO fair! I tried, I had written much more but it was crap, so I deleted it >.< No fussy at me missy! *pets* Hahaha, he isn't. Lmao. Wouldn't do that to youuus. <3
Date: Feb 14, 2011 01:43:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG I can't believe Strify never thought of this before! :O
Now they can be together all the time! ^_^
I'm so excited!
Author's Response: Hahaha, well yeah, if Strify never leaves the shower again XD But then he'd get all soggy >.<
Date: Feb 04, 2011 08:06:01 am Title: Chapter 10
Hee Hee yup we do have a lot of birthdays is January don't we haha
I love this story its sad but happy at the same time
Author's Response: I have 6 more in my family than you. Then 3 friends too. That's just the first week. Try that. It's exhausting. It is... Sad but Happy. Yea. xx
Date: Jan 25, 2011 03:50:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
*smiles widely* Oh darn! This was so cute that I can't even describe it! Yay for glitter!!!! *does a happy dance*
I hope the rainy days will come soon. I don't want Shin to disappear again. *nods slowly*
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it. I don't want Shin to disappear again either. :/ *hugs*
Date: Jan 22, 2011 04:27:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Maybe I think I pressed the "track this story" button but then I pressed the revert button to go back to the previous page... :/
Ah well. At least I came back :D
Author's Response: Which makes me very happy ^^
Date: Jan 22, 2011 01:45:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
"Biting his lip, Yu resisted the urge to turn his head and lick that beautiful skin."
Only you to write something like this ;D
Author's Response: LOL. Youbetcha. I totally used Yu to project my own desires. xD
Date: Jan 21, 2011 09:18:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hahahahahahaha. Okay, after this,
"He looked Shin’s face over quickly, really wanting to kiss him again like he had the other night, but before he could do anything, Shin had reached up and rubbed gently at his nose."
I was thinking, awwww man she's got more self control then me... Obviously I was wrong XD
But I love it. It is very cute with the cards. And very yummy with the glitter and tackling and what not. And I got sad about Shin being cold T.T
I love it. As usual.
Author's Response: Yeah, No. When it comes to Strify/Shin.... I have zero self control. xD I got sad about Shin being cold too... as, i think , did he. =( I was also thinking the whole time "No !! He's NOT a Twilight Vampire! Noo!!" YAY for being cuuute. =) xx
Date: Nov 29, 2010 04:09:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh Strify... *giggles* I just love him so much in this story. His awesomeness is awesome! *nods frantically*
YAAAAAAAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!! They kissed!!! *bounces* I've been waiting it so long. And Shin didn't leave during the night. Awh!! That was so cute!!! *bounces again*
Yay!! His first kiss!! *giggles*
” You’ve seen me naked, but have I gotten to see you in all your naked glory yet?! No.”
*nods* I agree with you, Strify! We'll stalk him one night. *grins* Though I have no idea how. xD
Author's Response: Hahahaha. I loooooove him too don't worry. XD I know!! I was SO excited to write that part! I think I died of a cuteness overload. Hahaha. I want to stalk too! Please?!?!?
Date: Nov 28, 2010 02:27:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
“It will always rain again.” He told him gently as he rubbed the boys back, wondering what the hell he was doing."
"He was sure of it now. He was flirting with a dead guy."
I laughed sooooooo hard on those two parts!!! xDD They're just so awesome!! *nods frantically*
Woe, woe StrifZ. *giggles* Well, to be honest, I understand you completely. If I had such ghost in my house, that is so hot and temting, I think I would do the same thing. *nods slowly* Not to mention; if I had Shin in my house... Wooooohooooo!!!!! *grins*
Strify, Strify; it's not nice reading other people's diaries. *points* But... umm... I won't tell anybody if you borrow me for a little. *puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response: Ahhh. You're so cute. I bet you'd love to have Shin in your house. He definitely would be so tempting! I'm glad I made you laugh. =D *hugs* xx
Date: Nov 22, 2010 04:12:41 am Title: Chapter 8
I think it was somehow ironic that I was listneing to 'After the Rain' while reading the begining.
I loved this, so glad you updated :D
I am very intrested to find out what is written in the diary.
Author's Response: AW. That's an awesome song to go with this! Ahahaa. I am so glad you loved it. Updates are indeed good. Jean is very excited to be working on the next bit... so I guess she wont take as long as I did. YAY for the diary! *hugs* xx
Date: Oct 07, 2010 03:27:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
I am totally confused right now! Who the heck is that little Shin? Is a little Shin now the bigger Shin, that's a ghost? I mean... aaah! I don't know who is little Shin or who is a big Shin!!! *mutters* Please, explain me!! Or just post another chapter! *puppy dog eyes* Great chapter though! ^_^ I love how Yu's following ever step that Strify makes. It's cute, on a weird way. xDD
Author's Response: Hahahahhaa. You've just managed to confuse me lol. I am sorry that you are confused!! It will all make sense, I promise. We have it all figured out and it makes sense to us. Haha, CinemaHotel's turn ^^. But I'm glad you like it! Danke! <3
Date: Oct 01, 2010 06:11:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh this is very interesting!
I can see a romance between Strify and Shin but... it looks so hard at the same time! If only he was "solid" and warmer Strify could at least cuddle him (or even better! ;)
Author's Response: Haha. Yes, yes it would be a difficult romance.
Date: Oct 01, 2010 04:42:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
awww i like this chapter.
although i'm a little confused.
the kid, is he a ghost?
and he and shin are like proper ghosts?
all transparent and stuff?
Author's Response: Yay. So this kid thing will be explained properly within the next to chapters, I think, as we reveal a little bit more of the story. But yes they are proper-ish (?) ghosts? Honestly it depends on the weather. Haha, that sounds strange but you'll see what I mean.
Date: Oct 01, 2010 04:37:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
ghaaaaaah!! =0 moaaar.. *flails*
i'm feeling sry for CinemaHotel now... having to continue from cliffies is never easy x)
but awesome chapter!!!!! =D
Author's Response: Buhaha. I didn't think of that. But I can't really help it, I always stop on cliffhangers and I am just used to it now.
Date: Oct 01, 2010 04:22:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG this was the greatest thing everrrr.
I loved that Strify just put that hat on... and it was so super awesome...
The photo album thing with Shin always alone was perfect too... and broke my heart.
It's amazing... and now... I have no idea how to... keep it amazing.
Author's Response: Yay!! I wasn't sure if I liked it or not, und I wouold have asked you to read it, but then I would have had to wait until moday to post so I just did it. But I'm glad its decent. Haha, and anything you do will be awesome lol.
Date: Sep 11, 2010 06:35:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Waaaaaaa!!! Shin's so uber cute!! I love him so much!! *huggles*
“Strife...” Yu said, taking a hold of his friend’s shoulders, and looking him firmly in the eyes. “What did you take?”
rofl mao! Awsome! *nods*
“I have no idea what you mean...” Yu smirked, “You just must have a smutty mind.”
“I do not...!” Strify said indignantly. Yu looked at him, and the smaller boy cracked up laughing. “Shut up and don’t be mean to me ... or I won’t give you any cheese.”
*giggles* Oh Strify! You're so mean! Not give someone a piece of cheese is a crime! *nods*
I forgive you, hun! It was a GREAT chapter so it's all good. *hugs*
Author's Response: Ha! Yay! I'm glad you likes those parts, they were personal favourites of mine. Thank you! *hugs* xx
Date: Sep 10, 2010 04:52:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
haha xD i love strify and yu's relationship!! ^^ and i love how strify just couldn't shut up when yu came home =P haha!! i really hope that shin heard that =P wouldn't that be cute? ^^
*huggles close* i don't care if it took u long to update! it was a gd update, so ur more than forgiven ^___^
Author's Response: Strify does that... >.> He either... won't say a thing without being massively persuaded... or... he just won't shut up. Maybe he's bipolar. ...Or he just likes messing with me. >< HA! Maybe Shin did hear... It's up to Jean now. *hugs* Yay. I'm glad you liked it. kisskiss
Date: Aug 27, 2010 12:45:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Shinna is CinemaHotel's nickname... tell CinemaHotel to hurry up with the next chapter is killing me!!!!!!! i wanna know whats gonna happen
Author's Response: Hahaha. Oh right of course. Lol, I acutally knew that, so I feel stooopid now. And yes mam, I will try to remember to tell her!
Date: Aug 07, 2010 10:48:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yaaaaaaaayyyyy!!! They met!!! *squeals*
Wow! Is Shin ghost or something?
Aff!! Strify!! You said he was hot yourself so why would you back away from him just 'cause he's cold?? Hell!! I wouldn't back away from his touch even if he was freezingly-cold. *shakes head*
Oh well, Strify, Strify... *shakes head again*
You. MUST. Update. SOONNNNNN!!!!!
This story is freaking awsome!! *hugs both of you*
Author's Response: Buhaha, there is a high chance that Shin is XD Maybe next time he won't back away,eh?? Yay!! Thank you!!! *hugs back*
Date: Aug 06, 2010 07:09:11 am Title: Chapter 5
And if mister thumper wanted to be naked in his room too, to fit in, Strify was pretty sure he wouldn’t mind that either, but he couldn’t just suggest that creeper man lose his clothes. That would make him creeper man.
lmao have I mentioned how much I love you lately? XD
Author's Response: Ja Shhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiin!! XD why actually I'm pretty sure you have lmfao. You do tell me alot XD <3
Date: Aug 06, 2010 12:06:50 am Title: Chapter 5
.> sooo, when I added this to my faves, it didnt go through, so Im just now getting caught up on it! -_- silly net. Anyways, I looooove this, and I want the rest of it....please?
Author's Response: Hah, aww silly interweb! Yes of course! Just for you :D
Date: Aug 05, 2010 07:14:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
ahahahhah *rolls off the couch* ouch... *continues laughing*
that was funny as HELL!!! xD i totally loved it, and it was well worth the wait *nods furriously*
i LOVE how u discribe strify's thoughts!! *dances around*
can't wait to read more!!! hurry up loren! xD haha =P
Author's Response: Hahahaha. Yay I'm amusing!! Hahaha ja ja hurrrry up Loren!! Lmao. XD
Date: Aug 05, 2010 08:02:03 am Title: Chapter 5
“Oh Yu, have you finally come to posses my body?”
Oh... Dear Lord...
Aaand then this...
" And if mister thumper wanted to be naked in his room too, to fit in, Strify was pretty sure he wouldn’t mind that either"
OMFGS! Hahahaa. I laughed. Lots.
I shall try and get right on the next bit.
Author's Response: Hahahahahahaha. I died to, I sat there for ten minutes trying to think of something for him to say. Lmao, Yay! <3 <3
Date: Aug 05, 2010 02:52:08 am Title: Chapter 5
Gaaaaa nien nien nien! *waving arms maddly* dont stop there gaaaaa... anywho its perfect... you and Sinna should wright more together (:
Author's Response: Hahahahaha, I'm sorry! Thank yoouuu. :) I'm sorry, I don't know who you're talking about...?
Date: Jul 19, 2010 10:27:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Ahaha lol Strify standing there with his pimp stick, in his underwear in a battle position....LOL
omg, you with you licking! I knew you wrote that one Loren xD
Author's Response: Oh Yes... I can not deny I would lick the hell out of him... *grins* Thanks for the review, Liebe. xx
Date: Jul 19, 2010 12:23:28 am Title: Chapter 4
lmfao I can't believe Strify ran in there in nothing to protect him but some undies and a pimp cane XD Anddd it's also totally amazing that you try and save KawaiiKiro from the blame and I totes blame her XD oops? >.> love this chapterrrr
Author's Response: Strify is so selfless like that... (Just Kidding. I wanted to play with a practically naked Strify... so I kept him like that xD) Aw. Well I had to save her... It was my fault. My, there was alot of saving going on in this one. Loves You xx
Date: Jul 18, 2010 07:55:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww!!! Cuteee!! I wonder where the kid went. I wonder if Stricy will ever catch it. I wonder if Yu will rape Strify like I'm wanting him to... Lol. Can't wait till the next chapter!! Maybe one of my questions will be answered!
Author's Response: Hahahaa. Maybe all of your questions will be answered. Maybe... It's up to KawaiiKiro now. Thanks for the review. xx
Date: Jul 18, 2010 05:48:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
awww ^___^ yu is so cuuuute!! and poor strify =( i think i'd die a little if i saw a little kid coming from under my bed O_O
Author's Response: I probably would too. Yay for Yu being cute. ;D Clearly Strify needs to tease him a little bit more. ;) Loves You. *hugs* xx
Date: Jul 18, 2010 12:56:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
“Alright.” Strify agreed, “But you have to carry all the heavy ones.”--hahahah!! Typical Strify.xD But I still loved that line, it was awsome. *smiles*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! That hug was soooo cuteeeeee!!!!! *smiles like an idiot* Those two are so damn cute!!
Uh! I can't wait for another chapter!!! This gets better and better and better and better... You get the point! xD
Update soon!!! *hugs*
Author's Response: Wheeee! *dances* I'm glad you liked my typical Strify line. AND the hug. I enjoyed that bit too. We surely can't wait to bring you more. ;D Thanks for the great review. *hugs* xx
Date: Jul 11, 2010 05:45:58 am Title: Chapter 2
I keep meaning to review this, und I kept forgetting >.<
I remembered this when i was being OCD and answering every review that wasn't answered no matter how old. xD
Fogive me for taking so long?
Anyway, this chapter was amaaazing.
And I love how well you showed Yu and Strifys relationship.
Liebe Dich :)
You are my hero!!
Author's Response: *Hugs* I do the OCD thing too. Haha. So, between us, our reviewers shall be kept very happy. =) Aww, Yay. I can't wait to play with Yu and Strify some more... Especially as you've left me with a practically naked Strify... *resists urge to squee* Liebe Dich Auch!!! *glomps*
Date: Jul 11, 2010 05:15:42 am Title: Chapter 3
I loved the chapter, we finnaly figuered out what the thing was lol! I hop you update soon, Im like sitting on my hands as best I can till the next chappie :)
Author's Response: Hehe, I am waiting too. It's all in CinemaHotel's wonderfully skilled hands now :) But I should warn you... Everything isn't what it seems o.O
Date: Jul 11, 2010 04:21:04 am Title: Chapter 3
"He wasn’t a fan of kids to begin with. Especially not little creepers that magically appeared in his bedroom.
And magically grew a million feet to draw on high surfaces with blue crayons."
I laughed. SO HARD.
I love it! *glomps*
And guess what!?
I reviewed! *pets*
Author's Response: Gyahh! I am veeeeeeeeeeery pleased with your glomping and petting skills! :) So thank you!
Date: Jul 10, 2010 06:34:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
god i love strify in this fic!! =P he's totally awesome xD
can't wait to read more about how this'll work out!! i wanna know more about this kid! =0
Author's Response: Hehe, me too! I always have fun writing Strify. More coming up :)
Date: Jul 10, 2010 05:09:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
*Gasp* Oh my goood!!!! You have to make more soon or I will send that kid to you! Lol.
Author's Response: Gyahhh! Please don't! If I see any little boys under my bed, even if its just my brother, I will cry T_T